Friday, November 4, 2011

Is My Character A Mary Sue?

I think that your character could use a bit of work, but is NOT a Mary Sue. To this profile I would add doubts about herself, maybe anything she regrets that she did, a bit more history (like who has her molester). I also think that the name and description do not fit together. I just think that the name 'Monica Reyes' sounds like a Mary Sue. My personal opinion would be to change the name or the appearance (like maybe keep Monica but scratch out Reyes (because it sounds Latin and this character doesn't seem Latin). Go more into what she likes and dislikes, personal experiences, and stuff like that. Plus, the entire character, no, story, depends on an interesting plot. I would love to know more before you ask me anything like this. It's like asking someone who's never read Harry Potter is Luna is their favorite character. Get my drift? Well, if you want, email me @ kahlanpotter@yahoo.com with more info on the story so I can critique. If you add the things I mentioned above, I think this character will turn out great, no matter the story. But I really can't stress enough that more info is needed for me to answer your question.

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